Question

假定你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在北京學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)�，F(xiàn)在由你給她發(fā)E-mail，邀請(qǐng)她參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)，要點(diǎn)如下：

(1)祝賀 她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲;  (2)感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ);

(3)時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn);  (4)地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂(lè)部(The Sun Club)302房間;

(5)路線：在她所住賓館門(mén)口乘坐332路公共汽車(chē)可直達(dá)。

注意：  (1)須包括以上主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫;

(2)詞數(shù)：120 ---- 150。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

(3)參考詞匯：歡送會(huì) farewell party

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams.________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________

                                                                 Yours Sincerely,

　                                                               Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Dear Jane,

    Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have made great progress in the two years of your studying Chinese in Beijing. There is no doubt that all you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you. And thank you very much for your help with our English. Without your help, we wouldn’t have found English easy and interesting to learn. The wonderful time which we spent together will never be forgotten.

    So a farewell party for you has been prepared before you leave for the US. It will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and i t will take you directly to the club.

    Our friends and I would appreciate it if you could come to the party. Looking forward to your early reply.

                                                                    Yours faithfully,

                                                                         Li Hua

【解析】：本文是邀請(qǐng)Jane參加為她而辦的歡送會(huì)。時(shí)態(tài)上現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要注意 不要遺漏文章的要點(diǎn)。要使用合適的連接詞，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體。也要使用一些高級(jí)句型如There is no doubt that…；可以給文章增色很多。同時(shí)選擇一些高級(jí)的詞匯詞組，如appreciate等。