Question

14．假如你是李華，昨天收到某報社編輯王先生的郵件，得知自己在本報社主辦的英語征文大賽中獲得了一等獎，他代表報社邀請你參加今年八月份舉辦的英語夏令營．
請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給王先生寫-封郵件：
1．感謝他的郵件通知；
2．接受邀請，期待參加夏令營；
3．咨詢夏令營的具體相關信息（如費用、注意事項等）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Mr．Wang，
My name is Li Hua．I am writing to thank you for informing me of the encouraging news that I have won the first prize in the English composition organized by your newspaper．
I'm excited to know that I can participate in the English summer camp in August this year．It's a great opportunity for me to join in such an instructive activity．Undoubtedly，I'd like to be a member of the group．Would you please tell me more information about the camp？When will the camp begin？How much will it cost？What do I need to prepare for it？
I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
I am writing to thank you for informing me of the encouraging news that I have won the first prize in the English composition organized by your newspaper
我想謝謝你告訴我這個振奮人心的消息，我在你們報社舉辦的英語作文獲得一等獎．
高分句型二：
It's a great opportunity for me to join in such an instructive activity．
這是我參加這樣一個有意義的活動的一個很好的機會．

解答 Dear Mr．Wang，
My name is Li Hua．I am writing to thank you for informing me of the encouraging news that I have won the first prize in the English composition organized by your newspaper（高分句型一）．
I'm excited to know that I can participate in the English summer camp in August this year．It's a great opportunity for me to join in such an instructive activity（高分句型二）．Undoubtedly，I'd like to be a member of the group．Would you please tell me more information about the camp？When will the camp begin？How much will it cost？What do I need to prepare for it？
I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．