Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假設(shè)你是Tom, 是一名高一新生。請你給自己的初中同學(xué)Jack寫一封信，簡要介紹自己的高中生活。
要點(diǎn)：
1）已經(jīng)適應(yīng)了高中的生活，并且交了好多朋友。
非常想念過去的老師和同學(xué)們；與現(xiàn)在的同學(xué)相處很好，對老師很滿意。
自己一定努力學(xué)習(xí)，為的是三年以后能夠上個(gè)好的大學(xué)。
注意：1）數(shù)80左右2）頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
Dear Jack,
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Answer 1

Dear Jack,
How time flies! I have been in high school for a whole month. At the beginning of this term, I felt a little lonely. But now I have made many new friends. By now, I have got used to my new life here. I miss all the teachers and classmates in Junior Middle school. At the same time, I get along well with my new classmates. The teachers here are very humorous and I like them very much. I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.
Yours,
Tom

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。請你給自己的初中同學(xué)Jack寫一封信，簡要介紹自己的高中生活。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.使用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和it做形式主語的句型，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly, At the same time等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點(diǎn)評：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。