Question

第二節(jié)：短文寫作（共1題；滿分30分）

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

You cannot change the weather, but you can change your mood.

注意：

無須寫標(biāo)題；

除詩歌外，文體不限;

內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例；

文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語不計入總詞數(shù)。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

The weather depends on the sky, but whether you are happy or not depends on yourself.

I can well remember that I didn’t pass the Chinese exam several times last year, so the weather of my sky seemed to be full of clouds. Although the songs of birds were very nice and the flowers were very beautiful, they could not let me escape from depression. What’s more, I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates. My Chinese teacher noticed my subtle difference, so she gave me some advice and told me to change my attitude. With the help of her, I tried to face the trouble with a positive attitude. To my surprise, everything changed. It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese.

Life is full of difficulties. Sometimes you may not be able to decide the situation you are in, but you can change your attitude.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文。題目要求根據(jù)英文提示來談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê徒ㄗh。作文要點要打好草稿，可以分段分別論述所給要點，注意作文的連貫性，做到流暢、自然。最好使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語be full of充滿；escape from從。。逃脫；laugh at 嘲笑；To my surprise使我感到吃驚的是；made great progress取得進步；whether you are happy or not depends on yourself.這個句子whether引導(dǎo)是主語從句；What’s more, I felt that I was laughed at by all the other classmates.這個句子運用到被動語態(tài)；It was not long before I made great progress in my Chinese.這個句子運用到it be not long before 。。。不久之后。。；

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