Question

13．假如你是學(xué)生會主席李津，為了增進(jìn)學(xué)生之間的交流，學(xué)生會決定在網(wǎng)上成立一個供學(xué)生英文交流的論壇，請根據(jù)下面要點提示介紹此論壇．
1、目的：提供交流平臺
2、要點：（1）加強(qiáng)交流，如結(jié)識朋友等
（2）提供幫助，如在學(xué)習(xí)、生活等方面
（3）歡迎獻(xiàn)計獻(xiàn)策，如在學(xué)校發(fā)展、校園生活方面
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100詞；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
The students'Union has decided to set up Study BBS of your own．All of us can benefit a lot from it．It offers us chances to communicate with each other，which can help us exchange our learning and life experience．We can share different cultures as well．What's more，it's a good place for us to make good friends．A life without a friend is a life without sunshine．In addition，anyone who has difficulty with their studies and daily life can ask for help on it．If you have any good suggestions to offer，you can lend a helping hand．Finally，good advice on how to enrich our school and how to develop our school is also welcome．
Wish you to join and fully express your ideas．．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）It offers us chances to communicate with each other，which can help us exchange our learning and life experience．
該句型在介紹論壇的目的時，使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which做主語，指代主語．
（高分句型二）In addition，anyone who has difficulty with their studies and daily life can ask for help on it．
該句型使用who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞anyone．
高級詞匯：exchange交換；have difficulty with 做某事有困難；
What's more而且，表遞進(jìn)；In addition另外；Finally最后；

解答    The students'Union has decided to set up Study BBS of your own．All of us can benefit a lot from it．
（高分句型一）It offers us chances to communicate with each other，which can help us exchange our learning and life experience．（交代此論壇的目的）We can share different cultures as well．（進(jìn)一步說明目的）What's more，it's a good place for us to make good friends．A life without a friend is a life without sunshine．（高分句型二）In addition，anyone who has difficulty with their studies and daily life can ask for help on it．If you have any good suggestions to offer，you can lend a helping hand．Finally，good advice on how to enrich our school and how to develop our school is also welcome．
    Wish you to join and fully express your ideas．

點評 該書面表達(dá)的時態(tài)使用得當(dāng)，概括文章所要求的全部要點，而且能夠有效地使用語句之間的連接成分，所寫內(nèi)容連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的．