Question

11．暑假即將來臨．你們班同學(xué)討論了假期計劃，提出了不同的看法．請根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關(guān)討論的英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />優(yōu)點缺點
待在家里花費(fèi)少，舒適方便不能親身了解外面的世界
外出旅游增長見識，開闊眼見花費(fèi)多，旅途不方便
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文 連貫．
3．參考詞匯：增長見識  increase their knowledge
開闊眼見broaden one's horizons．
The summer holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．But they will lose the chances of getting to know the outside world．
However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．
In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇有關(guān)討論假期計劃的英語短文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般將來時．內(nèi)容包括：一點明文章主題；二待在家里的優(yōu)缺點；三外出旅游的優(yōu)缺點；四自己的觀點．
高分句型：
1．However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．句子里prefer to 表示"更喜歡做某事"； since 引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示"因為"．
但是，其他人更喜歡外出旅行，因為這可以增長他們的見識，開闊他們的眼界．
2．In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．句子里In my opinion表示"依我看來"；for 引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示"因為"； what I like是賓語從句，表示"我喜歡的事"．
依我看來，待在家里更好，因為我可以做我喜歡的事，例如讀書，看電視，幫助父母做家務(wù)．

解答 The summer holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday（點明文章主題）
     Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．But they will lose the chances of getting to know the outside world．
（待在家里的優(yōu)缺點）     
    However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．【高分句型一】But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．（外出旅游的優(yōu)缺點）
     In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．【高分句型二】（自己的觀點）

點評 考查提綱類作文．寫作的步驟：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．