Question

18．假設(shè)你是李華，Harry是你的美國筆友．在來信中談到華盛頓的國會圖書館．你常常去北京的中國國家圖書館．于是你回信向他介紹這個圖書館．
注意：
（1）信的開頭已為你寫好；
（2）詞數(shù)不少于100．

位置面積	北京城西，紫竹院公園旁 24萬平方米，地上19層，地下3層，世界第三
藏書規(guī)模	2200萬冊，居亞洲之首
服務(wù)項目	圖書借閱；網(wǎng)上服務(wù)
使用觀感	設(shè)備先進，服務(wù)優(yōu)質(zhì)；環(huán)境幽雅，令人享受

提示詞：設(shè)備facilities
Dear Harry，
How are things going with you？Talking about famous libraries，I would like to introduce to you about our National Library．
The library，with Zi Zhuyuan Park as its neighbor，is located in the west of Beijing．It covers an area of 240，000 square meters，with 19 stories above the ground，and 3 stories underground，ranking the third in the world．（高分句型一）The library has a total collection of over 22，000，000 copies of books，the largest number in Asia．It provides readers with spacious reading rooms，convenient online service and the latest web information．（高分句型二）Its grand building，modern facilities and good service will surely leave you a very deep impression．No.9 bus can pick me up from home and drop me right in front of the library，so I often go there to study or to borrow books．I enjoy the quiet and literary atmosphere in the library．
Hope you can visit it some day and I'm looking forward to your next letter．
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hu．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息Harry是你的美國筆友．在來信中談到華盛頓的國會圖書館．你常常去北京的中國國家圖書館．于是你回信向他介紹這個圖書館，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從地理位置、藏書規(guī)模、服務(wù)項目和使用觀感幾個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be located in坐落于；leave sb a deep impression給某人留下深刻印象；pick up接，搭載；in front of 在…的前面；look forward to盼望；
It covers an area of 240，000 square meters，with 19 stories above the ground，and 3 stories underground，ranking the third in the world．（高分句型一）
It provides readers with spacious reading rooms，convenient online service and the latest web information．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Harry，
      How are things going with you？Talking about famous libraries，I would like to introduce to you about our National Library．The library，with Zi Zhuyuan Park as its neighbor，is located in the west of Beijing．It covers an area of 240，000 square meters，with 19 stories above the ground，and 3 stories underground，ranking the third in the world．（高分句型一）The library has a total collection of over 22，000，000 copies of books，the largest number in Asia．It provides readers with spacious reading rooms，convenient online service and the latest web information．（高分句型二）Its grand building，modern facilities and good service will surely leave you a very deep impression．No.9 bus can pick me up from home and drop me right in front of the library，so I often go there to study or to borrow books．I enjoy the quiet and literary atmosphere in the library．
       Hope you can visit it some day and I'm looking forward to your next letter．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．