Question

近來(lái)你們學(xué)校正準(zhǔn)備創(chuàng)建和申報(bào)“省綠色學(xué)校”請(qǐng)你據(jù)此給某英文報(bào)寫一篇短文

內(nèi)容包括 ※建設(shè)綠色校園的重要性……

※綠色校園不僅是指綠色的環(huán)境……

※為了建設(shè)綠色校園我們應(yīng)該……

注意 1、詞數(shù)100左右2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫 3、開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school?

 

Answer 1

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Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school? It means not only a green campus, but a "green" atmosphere for our study and life.

For one thing, a green campus means more plants, less pollution and no waste. Each of us can do something, such as planting trees and flowers or just saving electricity and water in our daily life. It will make a big difference. For another thing, it is necessary for us students to make great efforts to create a harmonious atmosphere of mutual trust and respect between teachers and students. Besides, it is important to keep a friendly and supportive attitude towards each other.

Accordingly, if everyone does one thing for our school, we'll surely turn our school into a better one.

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試題分析：打造文章之骨架審好題，立好意后，就要寫提綱，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：安排好層次段落，鋪設(shè)好過(guò)渡，處理好開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。如命題作文中有提示句，還要從提示句的關(guān)鍵詞出發(fā)，圍繞關(guān)鍵詞開(kāi)拓思路，發(fā)揮聯(lián)想，記錄下聯(lián)想到的東西，可以是句子或單詞詞組，可以是英語(yǔ)或漢語(yǔ)。理文章之脈絡(luò)一篇短文的段落一般分為引導(dǎo)段、主題段和結(jié)尾段。每段的主題句非常重要，是作者思維的起點(diǎn)，切題的準(zhǔn)繩，闡述的對(duì)象�？吹蕉温渲黝}句，讀者大致了解段落要闡述的內(nèi)容。段落主題句通常是一個(gè)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)完整、內(nèi)容概括、用詞簡(jiǎn)潔明了的單句。通常將段落主題句置于段落的開(kāi)頭，可使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰，有說(shuō)服力。本文的首句已給出，必須接好第二句，使上下文流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：用好連接詞，注意段落間、句子間的連貫性。要做到所寫文章層次分明，思路清晰，文字連貫，就需要在句與句之間，段與段之間架起一座座橋梁，而連接詞起的正是橋梁作用。用詞是否貼切，文法是否正確，句式是否多變，文采是否有生氣，關(guān)系到寫作者的語(yǔ)言功底和水平，但也有些竅門是需要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間累積的。