【題目】假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生Tom。前不久，你參加了全國(guó)英語(yǔ)演講比賽并獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給校刊寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀愕捏w會(huì)。內(nèi)容主要包括：

1．付出才有回報(bào)；

2．收獲自信和友誼；

3．感激之情。

注意 1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

3．開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．______________________________________________

【答案】

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.

Firstly，I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition , which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains,no gains”. Besides, I’ve established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I’ve learned a lot.. More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus, developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.

To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱作文，根據(jù)提示信息來(lái)談?wù)勛约?/span>參加全國(guó)英語(yǔ)演講比賽并獲得一等獎(jiǎng)的體會(huì)。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照提示的三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。 以第一人稱為主。4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如which，from whom 和without whose help三個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，還有taking this competition 和thus, developing my self-confidence2個(gè)動(dòng)詞的-ing形式做主語(yǔ)和狀語(yǔ)以及without whose help I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.虛擬語(yǔ)氣。此外，文章還使用了諺語(yǔ)No pains,no gains和短語(yǔ)如in public, owe to等。Besides，More importantly，Additionally和 To sum up,的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。

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