One possible version:
As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors a common phenomenon. Nowadays, students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need.
There are some reasons accounting for it. To begin with, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information, where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks. What’s more, there’s no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. As a result, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development.
In my opinion, measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.
試題分析:本文是看圖作文。從圖中我們可以看見一個男孩在寫作業(yè)，在網(wǎng)上求助，嘴巴還說，“太好了，可以不用自己動腦筋了。”這反映了現(xiàn)在存在的一個社會現(xiàn)象：學生利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)尋找自己所需信息，而產(chǎn)生了學習上的惰性。一般看圖作文，出題者都要求學生描繪這幅畫的內(nèi)容，然后說出反映什么樣的社會現(xiàn)象，說明這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，以及自己的觀點。，這篇也不例外。我們可以分三段來寫，第一段描繪圖的內(nèi)容以及其反映的現(xiàn)象，第二段說明產(chǎn)生的原因，第三段寫自己的觀點。原因至少要兩點，其一應該是網(wǎng)絡(luò)很方便，其二可以是學生壓力太大，或者負擔太重，說得有理就行。自己的觀點就是說如何解決這種依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)的心理。提高能力，培養(yǎng)自信等等。要注意組織好語言，多用一些能承上啟下的詞。如to begin with、as a result等等，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹。
【亮點說明】文章用了一些非常好的短語，如tend to, make use of:還用了許多很好的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，如非限制性定語從句As is vividly shown in the picture為文章添色不少。另外很注意文章的銜接，如：Firstly, Besides, Finally等等。
