分析 本文是要求寫一封道歉信.在寫作時(shí)要注意信件的格式,根據(jù)所列要點(diǎn)完成作文.必要時(shí)要充分發(fā)揮想象,增加適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫,充實(shí)內(nèi)容.比如上課使用手機(jī)的原因等等.在寫作時(shí)盡量使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,插入語以使文章層次分明,使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯亮點(diǎn)來提高文章的檔次,如定語從句,賓語從句和狀語從句等.
【名師點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文短小精悍,要點(diǎn)全面,語言簡(jiǎn)練,時(shí)態(tài)人稱準(zhǔn)確,很好的完成了寫作任務(wù).在文中作者用到了連詞therefore,but;短語get in touch with,have no other choice but to等等,避免了文章句式的單一.此外,還用到了賓語從句、表語從句,如that was exactly what I was doing等,這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點(diǎn).
I'm really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week.(高分句型一)
Last week I was trying to apply to some companies for my aunt,aged 48and out of work,and that day,I go an offer and they needed her further information immediately.
(高分句型二)Therefore,I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mr.Jackson,
I'm really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week.(高分句型一)Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.
I know any word might sound a made-up excuse.But I didn't use the mobile phone for no reason.Last week I was trying to apply to some companies for my aunt,aged 48and out of work,and that day,I go an offer and they needed her further information immediately.(高分句型二)Therefore,I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.(高分句型三)I promise it will never happen again.But I do need my phone back to get in touch with others.Will you be kind enough to give it back to me?
Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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