Question

【題目】高三第一次考試成績單

科目	語文	數(shù)學(xué)	英語	理綜
滿分	150	150	150	300
李強	101	143	95	279

假設(shè)你是李華，以上是你的朋友李強上次考試成績單。請根據(jù)其成績單給他寫一封回信。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。內(nèi)容要求：

1. 簡單敘述他的學(xué)習(xí)情況；

2. 對于今后復(fù)習(xí)備考，提出你的建議和意見。

3. 字數(shù)約120詞。

參考詞匯：成績單examination result list; 理綜science subjects;

Dear Li Qiang,

Your letter reached me yesterday. It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Qiang,

Your letter reached me yesterday. It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list that you are excellent at maths and science subjects while your Chinese and English are comparatively weak.

Your maths and science subjects are already good enough, so your aim should be keeping them at present level, making sure they will not drop. It is not worthwhile spending too much time on these subjects.

As for English and Chinese, You must try your best to find out why the marks always stay so low, and then you had better go to the teachers and classmates for advice, so that you can take effective measures to improve your English and Chinese.

There are several months left for you to prepare for the university entrance examinations. I hope you can keep balance all of the subjects and keep up spirits, and at the meantime balance between study and rest. Only in this way can you enter an ideal university.

Wish you success!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于書信類，根據(jù)提示信息來給李強寫一封回信。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯遞進關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照他學(xué)習(xí)的情況和以后的具體規(guī)劃進行介紹。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如固定結(jié)構(gòu)you had better go to the teachers and classmates for advice,倒裝句Only in this way can you enter an ideal university，被動語態(tài)It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list that you are excellent at maths and science subjects while your Chinese and English are comparatively weak.句型it is worthwhile ，It is not worthwhile spending too much time on these subjects。此外，文章還使用了大量短語keeping them at present level、try your best to find out、keep balance all of the subjects and keep up spirits、take effective measures等，使語言更加連貫。