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1．最近，"到底該不該為老年人讓座"的問題在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上被熱烈討論．很多人認(rèn)為"讓座只是美德，不是義務(wù)"．高二•九班的同學(xué)也對此進行了一場討論．請你寫一篇評論稿投給�？�，描述一下討論的情況，并表達自己的觀點．不用逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．字?jǐn)?shù)150字左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出．

支持讓座	1．讓座是中華民族傳統(tǒng)美德． 2．我們都會老，都需要幫助，要換位思考．   3．讓座也是文明行為，幫助別人也讓自己快樂．
反面的意見	1．老年人不應(yīng)該在年輕人上下班時去坐公交車． 2．年輕人每天工作累，壓力大，也會生�。� 3．有些老年人認(rèn)為年輕人讓座是理所當(dāng)然，讓人不愉快．

【提示】：讓座：give one's seat to…；     傳統(tǒng)美德：traditional virtue；
文明的 civilized；      認(rèn)為…理所當(dāng)然  take…for granted
Recently，whether the young should give their seats to the old on buses is being discussed on the internet．We classmates had a class meeting to discuss the topic．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一個表格式的作文，根據(jù)表格提供的內(nèi)容文章可寫成三段式．第一段分析支持讓座的原因，第二段分析不支持讓座的原因，第三段針對以上內(nèi)容闡明自己的觀點．要把表格中的要點信心擴展成一個個完整的句子，然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要求，把這些要點連句成文．同時注意上下文的銜接，靈活使用過渡詞以及各種句型，長短句結(jié)合，搭配適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞使文章銜接自然．
亮點句型一：Furthermore，some old people take it for granted that it's the young's duty to give seats to them，which makes them unpleasant．此外，有些老人想當(dāng)然地認(rèn)為年輕人的職責(zé)是給他們讓座，這使他們感到不愉快．這是一個復(fù)雜句，在句子some old people take it for granted that it's the young's duty to give seats to them中，it是形式賓語，真正的賓語是 that it's the young's duty to give seats to them；which makes them unpleasant是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前邊整個句子的意思"老人想當(dāng)然地認(rèn)為年輕人的職責(zé)是給他們讓座"這件事．
 亮點句型二：Only in this way can we have a harmonious society in common．只有這樣，我們才能有一個共同的和諧社會．這是一個倒裝句，only引導(dǎo)的方式狀語in this way 置于句首，句子要做部分倒裝，也就是把can提前．

解答 Recently，whether the young should give their seats to the old on busesis being discussed on the internet．We classmates had a class meetingto discuss the topic． Different students have different opinions on this matter．【社會現(xiàn)象】
Some students are in favor of giving seats to the old．They think that respecting the old is always Chinese traditional virtue．Besides，we will be old one day and we also need others'help．What's more，giving seats to the old people is also a civilized behavior．【支持讓座】
However，other students think differently．They say that the young people aren't supermen．They will also get sick and feel tired after a long day's hard work．They also need seats to rest on．As a result，the old people should try not to take buses during the rush hours．Furthermore，some old people take it for granted that it's the young's duty to give seats to them，which makes them unpleasant．（亮點句型一）【反對讓座】
As far as I am concerned，no matter you are the old or the young，you ought to put yourself into others'shoes and care about others'feelings．As an old saying goes，"One for all，all for one．"Only in this way can we have a harmonious society in common．（亮點句型二）【個人觀點】

點評 本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．