分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息 假如你叫李華.你的美國筆友Simon發(fā)來電子郵件,告訴你他和他的家人七月來北京體驗中國傳統(tǒng)文化,請為他安排北京一日游活動.請回復郵件.寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:告訴他你的活動安排并解釋安排的理由 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:with delight 高興地 First首先;Second其次;take a walk散步;Look forward to盼望;
Having learned with delight that you are coming to Beijing for a visit this July,I'm writing to offer my suggestions concerning your one-day trip in Beijing,which I hope will be to your liking.(高分句型一)
First,it is a good choice to visit the Palace Museum in the morning which helps you to learn more about Chinese history and architect since all the buildings were built in traditional Chinese style.(高分句型二)
Second,you can't afford to miss a tour of the hutong in the afternoon,where you can enter a Siheyuan and experience the life of the locals.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Simon,
Having learned with delight that you are coming to Beijing for a visit this July,I'm writing to offer my suggestions concerning your one-day trip in Beijing,which I hope will be to your liking.(高分句型一)
First,it is a good choice to visit the Palace Museum in the morning which helps you to learn more about Chinese history and architect since all the buildings were built in traditional Chinese style.(高分句型二)Second,you can't afford to miss a tour of the hutong in the afternoon,where you can enter a Siheyuan and experience the life of the locals.(高分句型三)In the evening,it can't be better to take a walk in the Tiananmen Square because it is the largest square in the world and attracts millions of tourists every year.
I hope you'll enjoy an unforgettable experience in Beijing.Look forward to your coming.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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