Question

【題目】假如你們學校“英語愛好者俱樂部”將對“健康話題”進行討論。請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要應(yīng)包括：

1.陳述部分同學的不良飲食習慣

2.良好的飲食習慣包括內(nèi)容有哪些

3.個人對于健康飲食的看法

參考詞匯:偏食be particular about food;零食snack; 要求字數(shù)120左右

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于發(fā)言稿，根據(jù)提示信息和要求來寫作。寫作時注意以下幾點：1. 仔細題目中有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2. 要依據(jù)圖中提示信息，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。寫發(fā)言稿時要注意提示所給的要點有邏輯順序的表達。3. 根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。 4. 注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。5. 發(fā)言稿應(yīng)該注意有號召力，語言適用于公共場合的演講，能夠讓大家產(chǎn)生共鳴。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，文中第一段陳述了部分同學的不良飲食習慣，第二段介紹了良好的飲食習慣所包括的內(nèi)容，最后第三段闡述了作者自己對于健康飲食的看法。與此同時，文章使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如As we all know, Therefore, However, Besides等插入語，使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，語言流暢。另外，句式多樣化，在Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. 中用it做形式主語防止整句頭重腳輕；To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food.是復(fù)雜的定語從句的運用；Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.是Only引導的倒裝句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語are particular about, do harm to, as well as, In my opinion, build up等，使文章文采斐然，在公共場合中發(fā)言十分具有號召力。