Question

【題目】假設你是晨光中學高三學生李津。你校于6月8日舉辦了成人禮活動，你的英國朋友Chris很想了解該活動。你于當晚給Chris回一封電子郵件，介紹關情況，內容包括:

(1)成人禮活動內容(成長點滴回顧、觀看校友抗疫事邊錄像)；

(2)對活動的感受；

(3)對自己未來的展望。

注意:

(1)詞數不少于100；

(2)可適當加入細節(jié)，使內容充實、行方連貫；

(3)開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯:

成人禮 the coming-of age ceremony

新冠腦炎 COVID-F9

Dear Chris,

I’m so glad to hear from you.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Jin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris,

I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.

Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.

Best wishes！

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

這是一篇應用文，要求寫一封信。

第一步:審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中學的李津。你校于6月8號舉辦了成人禮活動，你的英國朋友Chris 很想了解該活動。你于當晚給Chris 回一封電子郵件，介紹相關情況，內容包括:(1)成人禮活動內容(成長點滴回顧，觀看校友抗疫事跡錄像等)2. 對活動的感受。3. 對自己未來的展望。第二，人稱為第一人稱。第三，時態(tài)為一般現在時，一般過去時和一般將來時。

第二步:布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數量。這篇寫作段落數量為三段。第一段:成人禮活動內容(成長點滴回顧，觀看校友抗疫事跡錄像等)。第二段:對活動的感受；對自己未來的展望。第三段，表達期望。

第三步:確定關鍵詞匯和短語:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；

第四步:確定較為高級的句子:that引導的定語從句和現在分詞作狀語During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引導的表語從句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.時間狀語從句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.

第五步:連句成文，注意使用恰當的連接詞進行過渡銜接:After that, besides, however.

第六步:注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。