Question

【題目】英語課上，老師要求同桌相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。 錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出改加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Once upon a time, it was a boy whose parents named him Odd(古怪的). Other children teased him about his name but kept him at a distance, thinking that he was very strange and behaved stupid. Deeply hurt, he refused to be bothered and struggle to break away from the pain. He tried to keep people off teasing him, but in vain. People continued making fun of his name—even after he became a successful lawyer. Finally, as a old man, he wrote out his last wish, “I’ve been the butt(笑柄) of jokes all my life. I’ll let others make fun of myself after I’m gone.” He insisted his tombstone not to bear his name. After his death, people passing by noticed the largest blank stone and said loudly, “Look, that’s odd.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】it→there

【2】but→and

【3】stupid→stupidly

【4】struggle→struggled

【5】off→from

【6】a→an

【7】let前加not

【8】myself→me

【9】to去掉

【10】largest→large

【解析】

試題分析：一個叫odd的男孩從小就被人嘲笑他的名字，直至長大變老去世，一生都被這個名字所困擾的故事。

【1】it→there 句意：從前，有一個男孩，他父母叫他古怪。此句表示“有”的意思，應(yīng)該用there be句型，故it改成there。

【2】but→and 前后句之間是順承關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故but改成and。

【3】stupid→stupidly 副詞修飾動詞behave，所以stupid改成stupidly。

【4】struggle→struggled and連接并列句，故時態(tài)應(yīng)一致，前句是過去時，所以后句也用過去時，故struggle改成struggled。

【5】off→from 此處是固定搭配keep sb from doing，表示“不讓某人做某事”，因此off改成from。

【6】a→an old首字母發(fā)元音，故冠詞需用an，故a改成an。

【7】let前加not 根據(jù)句意，此處是不讓別人嘲笑我，應(yīng)用否定，故let前加not。

【8】myself→me 根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)用賓格代詞，而不是反身代詞，故myself改成me。

【9】to去掉 此處是一個賓語從句，謂語部分是（should）do,用原形，故to去掉。

【10】largest→large 此處是指大石碑，沒有最高級的意思，故largest改成 large。