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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之問交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Sir,

I’m glad to learn that part-time assistants was wanted in your studio and I’d like to have a try.

I’m a student who is graduated from high school soon. Before attending the college, I’ll have a long holiday and I’m determined to make the best of them. Since childhood, I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films. My teacher thinks highly of my performance in the language class, when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry. Except that, I am the monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management.

I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work. I am full convinced that through communication with the staffs, I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills.

I’m looking forward receiving your reply soon. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

【1】was→are

【2】graduated→Graduating

【3】去掉the

【4】them→it

【5】when→where

【6】Except→Besides

【7】many→much

【8】full→fully

【9】staffs→staff

【10】加to

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇求職信，由于我即將高中畢業(yè)，迎來一個漫長的假期，因此想找份兼職工作，我在語言方面很有天賦，希望通過這份工作增長自己的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)與社會技能。

【1】was→are 考查be動詞的單復(fù)數(shù)變化。由于系動詞的名詞是復(fù)數(shù)形式，因此系動詞也要變成復(fù)數(shù)形式，此文陳述的是招聘信息，還未找到求職者，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在時。

【2】graduated→graduating 考查非謂語動詞。我與畢業(yè)是主動關(guān)系，因此用現(xiàn)在分詞表主動。

【3】去掉the 考查冠詞。由于作者還未上大學(xué)，所以大學(xué)前不用加定冠詞the。

【4】them→it 考查代詞。此處代詞指前面提到的假期，假期就一個，所以用表示單數(shù)的代詞it。

【5】when→where 考查定語從句引導(dǎo)詞的使用。此處所表達(dá)的是在語言班我學(xué)習(xí)到了很多知識，應(yīng)用表示地點(diǎn)的引導(dǎo)詞where。

【6】Except→Besides 考查介詞。except表示除了，而besides表示除了……還有。

【7】many→much 考查代詞。經(jīng)驗(yàn)是不可數(shù)名詞，因此用much修飾

【8】full→fully 考查副詞。動詞前應(yīng)用副詞修飾

【9】staffs→staff 考查名詞。員工是一個集合名詞，因此不能加s。

【10】加to forward后加to考查動詞的固定短語搭配，look forward to期望。

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