【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下畫劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

The number and species of fish had dropped sharply in the past few decades. It is human behavior which is to blame.Industrial and agricultural waste is pouring. into the ocean, which seriously pollutes the water. To make things bad, overfishing destroys the balance of life in the ocean.

It is a high time that measures should be taken to deal with this situation. The government should make law to keep people overfishing. At the same time, anyone who causes water pollution should be strict punished. All of us should try our best to protecting the fish in the ocean. After all, that is everyone's duty to protect the environment around us.

【答案】1.had→has

2.which→that

3. pouring→poured

4. bad→worse

5.去掉a

6. law→laws

7. people之后加from

8. strict→sticky

9. protecting→protect

10. that→it

【解析】

本文是一篇說明文。過度捕撈造成海洋中的魚的數(shù)量和種類急劇下降。現(xiàn)在是采取措施處理這種情況的時候了。 政府應該制定法律來防止人們過度捕撈，嚴格懲罰那些造成水污染的人�？傊�，我們都應該盡力保護海洋中的魚。

1.考查時態(tài)。句意：在過去的幾十年里，魚的數(shù)量急劇下降。in the past +一段時間，是現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)的標志，The number of ……的數(shù)量，做主語時，謂語動詞用單數(shù)，根據(jù)句意及分析，故將had改為has。

2.考查強調(diào)句型。句意：這應該歸咎于人類的行為。根據(jù)句意及分析可知，human behavior is to blame.是完整的句子，故此處考查強調(diào)句型，It is+...+that...，被強調(diào)的部分是humans' behavior，故將which改為that。

3.考查語態(tài)。句意：工業(yè)和農(nóng)業(yè)廢物倒入海洋，嚴重地污染海水。主語waste與pour是動賓關(guān)系，用被動語態(tài)，故將pouring改為poured。

4.考查形容詞比較級。句意：更糟的是，過度捕撈破壞了海洋中生命的平衡。to make thingsworse“使事情更糟糕的是”，是固定表達，根據(jù)句意及分析可知，故將bad改為worse。

5.考查冠詞。It’s high time that...“真的到了……時候了”是固定句型，故去掉high前的冠詞a。

6.考查名詞。law“法律”是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)句意“政府應該制定法律來防止人們過度捕撈�！笨芍�，用復數(shù)，故將law改為laws。

7.考查固定短語。keep sb.from..“阻止某人做某事”，是固定短語，from不能省略，故people之后加from。

8.考查形容詞。修飾動詞用副詞作狀語，故將strict改為strictly。

9.考查非謂語動詞。句意：我們大家應當竭盡全力保護海洋中的魚類。try one’s best to do sth.“竭盡全力做某事”，用不定式做目的狀語，故將protecting改為protect。

10.考查代詞。句意：總之嗎，保護我們周圍的環(huán)境是每個人的責任。分析句子可知，真正的主語是不定式短語 to protect the environment around us，故用形式主語it，故將that改為it。

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