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12．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m and ends at 3：30 p．m．They are three  lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon．We didn't need to do so many homework．Therefore，we have more time with after-school activities．For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day．
My dream school look like a big garden．There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings．We can lie on the grass for a rest，sat by the lake listening music．The teachers here are kind and helpfully．They are not only our teachers but also our friends．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中描述了自己理想的學(xué)校的情況，學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)很輕，沒有作業(yè)；環(huán)境很美，像個(gè)花園；老師和藹，跟朋友一樣．

解答 My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m and ends at 3：30 p．m．They are three  lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon．We didn'tneed to do so many homework．Therefore，we have more time with after-school activities．For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day．
My dream school look like a big garden．There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings．We can lie on the grass for a rest，sat by the lake listening∧music．The teachers here are kind and helpfully．They are not only our teachers but also our friends．
詳解：
1．they改為there；考查固定句型，這里應(yīng)該用there be句型，表示"我們?cè)缟嫌腥��?jié)課"．故They應(yīng)改為There．
2．didn't改為don't；考查時(shí)態(tài)．本文通篇時(shí)態(tài)都是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語是復(fù)數(shù)．故用don't．
3．many改為much；考查近義詞辨析，homework是不可數(shù)名詞，要用much修飾．many修飾可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將many改為much．
4．with改為for；考查介詞搭配．句意：我們有做…的時(shí)間．這里介詞for表示目的．
5．hour改成hours；考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式．句子中的one and a half意思是"一個(gè)半"，后面的名詞必定是復(fù)數(shù)，故用hours．
6．look改成looks；考查主謂一致．主語是my dream school，是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語用單數(shù)形式，而且這篇文章使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故用looks．
7．去掉the；考查冠詞．可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)前通常不用冠詞，表示泛指．所以這里flowers和trees均為泛指，不用冠詞，去掉the．
8．sat改為sit；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故將sat改為sit，與前面的lie構(gòu)成并列成分，意為"我們可以躺在草地上休息一會(huì)兒，坐在湖邊聽音樂"．
9．listening后面加to；考查動(dòng)詞，listen為不及物動(dòng)詞，不能直接跟賓語，和介詞to搭配，故listening后面加to．
10．helpfully改為helpful；考查形容詞． 由連詞and連接的兩個(gè)詞，其形式應(yīng)該是一致的．由are kind得知應(yīng)該是系表結(jié)構(gòu)，故helpfully改為helpful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在這篇短文改錯(cuò)當(dāng)中，首先要從整體掌握短文大意，結(jié)合上下文語境并充分運(yùn)用平時(shí)掌握的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，習(xí)慣用法，短語搭配等對(duì)短文進(jìn)行分析，以便找出文中的錯(cuò)誤所在．