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18．假定你是李華．你的英國(guó)朋友Karl暑期將來(lái)你所在的城市學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，他來(lái)信向你征求課外運(yùn)動(dòng)的建議．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封回信．
1．建議運(yùn)動(dòng)方式；
2．說(shuō)明理由；
3．表達(dá)祝愿．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Karl，
I'm delighted to know you will come to China to study Chinese this summer．
          ．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為書(shū)信類作文，要求寫(xiě)一封建議信，就英國(guó)朋友Karl暑期將來(lái)你所在的城市學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)給出課外運(yùn)動(dòng)的建議，雖然要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，但是需要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容包括：建議運(yùn)動(dòng)的方式；理由；向他表達(dá)祝愿．注意使用連接詞，使作文連貫，注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱．

重要短語(yǔ)：delighted to高興
come to 來(lái)到，study Chinese學(xué)習(xí)中文
as for至于
after school放學(xué)后
share with sb和某人分享
easily accessible方便
In addition此外
stay in待在
Best wishes 最美好的祝福

高分句型：
1．No matter which you choose，making sure of your safety is the first thing．
whichever 既可以引導(dǎo)名詞性從句也可以引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句時(shí)可以轉(zhuǎn)換成no matter which．no matter which 只可以引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．
例如：
Either Friday or Monday---choose whichever day is best for you．（名詞性從句）
Whichever party gets in at the next election，the economy is going to be in a mess．
=No matter which party gets in at the next election，the economy is going to be in a mess（讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）

2．Swimming in the river or swimming pools is strongly recommended partly because it is hot in summer here
動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)，如：Collecting information about children's health is his job．收集有關(guān)兒童健康的信息是他的工作．

3．If you have any other problems，please contact me without hesitation．
if 引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句表示某事很可能發(fā)生，條件是可能存在的，主句中某種情況發(fā)生的概率也是很高的．
如：If you ask him，he will help you．如果你請(qǐng)他幫忙，他會(huì)幫你的．

解答 Dear Karl，
    I'm delighted to know you will come to China to study Chinese this summer． As for taking exercise after school，here I have some suggestions to share with you．（歡迎Karl的到來(lái)）
   Swimming in the river or swimming pools is strongly recommended partly because it is hot in summer here，（高分句型） and partly because the places for swimming are easily accessible．In addition，climbing is extremely good for your health and time can be scheduled flexibly．So climbing mountains is also not a bad choice．No matter which you choose，making sure of your safety is the first thing．（高分句型）（給出建議并說(shuō)明理由）
   If you have any other problems，please contact me without hesitation．（高分句型） I believe you will have a good time during the stay in China．Best wishes!（表達(dá)自己的祝愿）
Yours，
Li hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇書(shū)信類作文，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)要表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱，固定詞組搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系．