9.假定你是李華,你的好朋友Judy因考試發(fā)揮失常,導(dǎo)致成績(jī)不理想而情緒低落.請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封信表示安慰,要點(diǎn)如下:
1)對(duì)她目前狀況表示理解;
2)建議她找出失常的原因并吸取教訓(xùn);
3)鼓勵(lì)她樹(shù)立信心,爭(zhēng)取下次考出好成績(jī).
注意:
1)詞數(shù)100左右;
2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3)開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Judy,
    I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exam andthat you are depressed and worried about your study.I quite understand how you feel now.As your friend,I have some tips for you.
First of all,I want to say failure is the mother of success.So never give up though you failed this time.You should try to analyze the cause and draw a lesson from it.This can help you make up for the shorts of knowledge and skills in those areas.The next is to build up confidence.For it is the deciding factor to ideal grade.I am sure bydoing this your test results will be improved next time and gradually your confidence will also come back.                                                                                
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 (高分句型一)I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exam and that you are depressed and worried about your study.在表達(dá)難過(guò)的時(shí)候,使用了兩個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句,要注意第二個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)詞that不能省略;be depressed and worried 表示憂慮和擔(dān)心;
(高分句型二)I am sure by doing this your test results will be improved next time and gradually your confidence will also come back.
該句型使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),即your test results will be improved,你的測(cè)試成績(jī)將得到提高;
高級(jí)詞匯:depressed and worried 憂慮和擔(dān)心;failure is the mother of success失敗是成功之母;draw a lesson 得到一個(gè)教訓(xùn);make up for彌補(bǔ);build up confidence建立自信;

解答 Dear Judy,
(高分句型一)I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exam and that you are depressed and worried about your study.(表達(dá)對(duì)她的理解之情)I quite understand how you feel now.As your friend,I have some tips for you.
(給出具體的建議)First of all,I want to say failure is the mother of success.So never give up though you failed this time.You should try to analyze the cause and draw a lesson from it.This can help you make up for the shorts of knowledge and skills in those areas.The next is to build up confidence.For it is the deciding factor to ideal grade.(高分句型二)I am sure by doing this your test results will be improved next time and gradually your confidence will also come back.
                                                                              Yours,
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧

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