Question

你是李華，向Teenagers雜志Conversation With Broad 欄目的負責人Brand寫了一封信，向他敘述與父母的一次沖突，并請求他們的建議。請根據(jù)下圖完成該信。

注意：

可適當增加細節(jié)。

詞數(shù)120字左右。信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

Dear Brand,

I’m a student from Xinhua Senior High School. Last Sunday, after leaving school, I went home extremely tired. I wanted to have a good rest and relax myself. Before my parents could say hello to me, I went straight to my own bedroom. Though my parents were very confused, they didn't ask me why and continued cooking.

Upon entering the room, I turned on the tape recorder on its full volume. I was lost in loud music when my mother rushed into my room angrily, saying “do you have to turn up your music so loud? ” I was supposed to say sorry to him. But why didn’t they ask me what happened instead of shouting at me ? I feel so lonely. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文敘述的是李華與家人的一次沖突，因為敘述的是過去的事情，所以使用一般過去時和第一人稱。首先要審要點：1.李華回到家，感覺很累；就打開音樂聽，想好好休息；2.父母親回家感到很困惑，但是仍然繼續(xù)做法。3.我把聲音調(diào)到最大，媽媽沖進房間指責我。我感覺很委屈。

看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達出來，除了能表達清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個要素；

亮點說明：范文里謀篇布局的安排很好，顯得文章很流利。另外非謂語動詞的使用很好，如：I was lost

in loud music when my mother rushed into my room angrily, saying “do you have to turn up your music so loud? ”中的saying就是過去分詞做狀語用法。

考點：考查看圖作文