12.假如你李華,你所在的學(xué)校攝影協(xié)會將在周六上午到北山公園舉行主題為"the
Beauty of Nature"的活動,外教Bob由于不熟悉地形,你給他寄去一張路線圖并寫
一封信,以便他能順利到達(dá).
主要內(nèi)容:1.說明活動集合的時間(上午9:00)和集合地點(diǎn)(公園入口);
  2.介紹從校門口到公園的路線;承諾在公園門口等他.
  3.希望Bob能玩得盡興.
要    求:1.字?jǐn)?shù):100左右
   2.根據(jù)內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫
   3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好
參考詞匯:攝影協(xié)會:photography club,路線:route,校園路:Campus Road
Dear Bob,
I am glad to inform you that our photography club is going to have an activity with the topic"the Beauty of Nature"in Bei Shan Park this Saturday.
                                                        
Best wishes
Yours truly
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文,根據(jù)提示信息給外教Bob 寄去一張路線圖并寫一封信,以便他能順利到達(dá).寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點(diǎn):說明活動集合的時間(上午9:00)和集合地點(diǎn)(公園入口);介紹從校門口到公園的路線;承諾在公園門口等他.希望Bob能玩得盡興.
 2、圖表是文章的總體框架,要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):be familiar with對…熟悉,get close to靠近,live in harmony with nature與自然和諧相處,have a good time過得愉快
Since you are not familiar with the city,let me tell you how to get to the park.(高分句型一)
Dear Bob,I believe the activity is a good chance for us to get close to nature and know how to live in harmony with nature.(高分句型二)

解答 Dear Bob,
     I am glad to inform you that our photography club is going to have an activity with the topic"the Beauty of Nature"in Bei Shan Park this Saturday.We will meet at the entrance of the park at 9:00 a.m..Since you are not familiar with the city,let me tell you how to get to the park.(高分句型一)After going out of our school,go along Campus Road until you come to the first traffic lights.Then turn right.Go straight along Bei Shan Road and after ten minutes you'll see the park at the end of the road,and we will be waiting for you at the gate.Dear Bob,I believe the activity is a good chance for us to get close to nature and know how to live in harmony with nature.(高分句型二)I am sure we will have a good time.
       Best wishes
                                                          Yours truly,
                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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