Question

下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的下方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意： 1. 每句不超過(guò)兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤；
2. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均只限一詞；
3. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Last weekend our school hold a sports meeting. Knowing it was my last high school sports meeting, we decided to make it a unforgettable experience for all of us. We first attended the opening parade, for our class had made a lot of preparations. Our parade took up the shape of the letter “V”, indicated victory for ourselves. To our excitement, our parade performance was a great success. Before the parade, the games started. My classmates attended various event and their performances were very impressively. Finally, the result was announced. It was amazing that our class won the second place. I believe this sports meeting will be remain a precious memory for all of us as time goes by.

Answer 1

小題1:hold—held
小題2:my—our
小題3:a—an
小題4:for后加which
小題5:up—on
小題6:indicated –indicating
小題7:before –after
小題8:event—events
小題9:impressively—impressive
小題10:去掉the

試題分析：
小題1:根據(jù)Last weekend可知是發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事情，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。
小題2:根據(jù)下文we，可知這里用our。
小題3:unforgettable首字母的發(fā)音是元音，故用an。
小題4:這里含有一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，所以for后加which。
小題5:take on是固定用法，意思是呈現(xiàn)。
小題6:indicate與其邏輯主語(yǔ)之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞。
小題7:這里表示在列隊(duì)行進(jìn)之后，比賽開(kāi)始了，所以before –after。
小題8:根據(jù)various，所以用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。
小題9:用形容詞作表語(yǔ)。
小題10:不表特指，所以去掉the。