Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Miss Kate,

I learned from the newspaper that you’re looking for an English teacher for our school. I am writing to you to apply of the teaching position and I believe I am the right person you are looking for.

Firstly, allow me to introducing myself. My name is Li Hua, and I am an eighteen-year-old girl. I had just graduated from high school but taken the University Entrance Examination. I have a good command of English and I have gone to America study English for two years. However, I am a very patient person and love the children very much. I’m sure I’ll do a good job if I’m accepted.

I sincerely hope you can give me a chance. I am looked forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

1.our→ your

2.of→ for

3.introducing → introduce

4.had → have

5.but → and

6.gone → been

7.study 前加to

8.However → Besides /Moreover / Additionally

9.去掉children 前的the

10.looked → looking

【解析】

1.our→ your 考查代詞。句意：我從報紙上了解到你們學(xué)校在尋找英語老師；

2.of→ for 考查介詞 wait for 等待。

3.introducing → introduce 考查動詞的用法。Allow sb to do sth允許做某事；

4.had → have 考查動詞的時態(tài)。句意：我已經(jīng)從高中畢業(yè) ，用現(xiàn)在完成時。

5.but → and 考查連詞。句意：我已從高中畢業(yè)且參加高考；兩個句子并列關(guān)系；

6.gone → been 考查動詞用法。Have been to 去過某地又回來了；have gone to 去了某地，沒有回來 ；

7.study 前加to 考查動詞的用法。句意：我去美國學(xué)習(xí)英語二年，表示目的；

8.However → Besides /Moreover / Additionally 考查副詞，句意：況且，我還是個有耐心的人并且很喜歡孩子；

9.去掉children 前的the 考查冠詞。Love children喜歡孩子表示泛指，the children這些孩子表示特指，

10.looked → looking 考查動詞的用法。Look forward to 加名詞或動名詞，盼望做某事；

考點：短文改錯；