分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作,這類作文可按照三段式模板寫:第一段:概況所給短文要點.第二段:過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由.第三段:個人觀點.特別要注意第一段的概括.用自己的語言概括,不能照搬照抄原文. 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時.人稱用第一和第三人稱. 重要短語:speak of (提及,談及),because of (因為),throw away (扔掉),a promising future(有前途的未來),having trouble doing sth(做某事有困難),work out(解出),come across(偶遇),fail the test(考試失敗),in the short-term(從短期角度看),in the long-term(從長期角度看),revise sth (修改,修訂某物).
【高分句型一】
1.Li Hua spoke of an overseas Chinese student who couldn't find a job because of his dishonesty.
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句,先行詞為"an overseas Chinese student".
【高分句型二】
2.After reading this speech,I felt really sorry for the student who had thrown away his years of hard work,great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits.
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句,先行詞為"the student".
【高分句型三】
3.But when he came across a similar question in the final exam,he didn't know how to solve it and eventually failed the test.
此處是由連詞"when"引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句,主句為"he didn't know how to solve it and eventually failed the test".
【高分句型四】
4.①While dishonesty helped him in the short-term during the quiz,it hurt him in the long-term ②because he didn't revise that type of problem for the final exam.
①此處是由連詞"While"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句,意為"雖然,盡管"主句為"it hurt him in the long-term".
②此處是由連詞"because"引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句,主句為"it hurt him in the long-term".
解答 In this speech,Li Hua spoke of an overseas Chinese student who couldn't find a job because of his dishonesty.The story shows us that honesty really is the best policy.【高分句型一】
(概括)
After reading this speech,I felt really sorry for the student who had thrown away his years of hard work,great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits.【高分句型二】Now,he knows better than anyone that dishonesty costs dearly.(感受)
My classmates Wang Tao once made a similar mistake.During a math quiz,he was having trouble working out a problem.When the teacher looked away,he peeked and copied the answer from his classmate.He was glad that he had a high mark in the quiz.But when he came across a similar question in the final exam,he didn't know how to solve it and eventually failed the test.【高分句型三】
(以他人的經(jīng)歷說明)
While dishonesty helped him in the short-term during the quiz,it hurt him in the long-term because he didn't revise that type of problem for the final exam.【高分句型四】
I shall always remember this lesson and be an honest person.(個人觀點--道理)
點評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合,要求考生既能讀懂文章信息,又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容,其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要,根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括,總的來說,遵循以下步驟:確定主題句;尋找關(guān)鍵詞;重構(gòu)主題句;重組支持句.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時需注意積累短語和重要句型.
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