Question

19．假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom來信詢問你十一假期過的怎樣．請根據(jù)表格中的信息給他回信，說明你在十一假期中的活動和理由．

活動	理由
休息	學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，缺少鍛煉和休息
看望鄉(xiāng)下的祖父母	幫他們做家務(wù)并談了身邊的新鮮事
和朋友短途旅行	欣賞大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣

注意：詞數(shù)100左右．
十一假期  the National Day holiday  學(xué)習(xí)壓力 study burden     缺少 lack of    鄉(xiāng)下 countryside    家務(wù)活 housework     短途旅行 trip    欣賞 appreciate    呼吸 breathe．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的美國筆友Tom來信詢問你十一假期過的怎樣．請根據(jù)表格中的信息給他回信，說明你在十一假期中的活動和理由，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從計劃和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：First首先；as a result of由于…的原因；do some housework 做家務(wù)；as well as 也，和；What's more而且；look forward to盼望；
First，I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．（高分句型一）
Of course，it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and helped them do some housework and told them what had happened to me and my friends．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm very glad to receive your letter．And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．
       First，I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．（高分句型一）Of course，it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and helped them do some housework and told them what had happened to me and my friends．（高分句型二）What's more，I made a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathed fresh air．What did you do in your summer holidays？
      I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．