Question

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）, 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：
1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They
find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing while they
are walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places
that people has never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it
not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be
passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

Answer 1

【小題1】held前加been
【小題2】刪去to
【小題3】deep—deeply
【小題4】relaxing—relaxed
【小題5】has—have
【小題6】刪去been
【小題7】because后加of
【小題8】life—lives
【小題9】so—such
【小題10】which—that

解析試題分析：文章介紹了我們班級(jí)針對(duì)遠(yuǎn)足進(jìn)行的討論。
【小題1】本句話是指討論被舉行，應(yīng)該使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的形式。
【小題2】固定詞組make sb do sth讓某人做某事。
【小題3】用副詞deeply修飾動(dòng)詞attract。
【小題4】對(duì)指人的主語(yǔ)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明使用過(guò)去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞relaxed。
【小題5】主語(yǔ)是people，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題6】happen沒(méi)有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。故這里不應(yīng)該有been。
【小題7】后面是名詞poor knowledge of hiking.，故使用because of。
【小題8】前面是形容詞性物主代詞their故后面使用復(fù)數(shù)形式lives.
【小題9】后面是名詞短語(yǔ)dangerous activities,故使用such。而不是so，so后面接形容詞或者副詞。
【小題10】that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句解釋名詞suggestion的內(nèi)容。that在句中不充當(dāng)任何成分，只起連接作用。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)