Question

11．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
上周一，你在一所小學(xué)觀摩了小女孩Amy所在班級的兩堂繪畫課（如圖所示），回家后你用英語寫了一篇日記，內(nèi)容包括：
●對兩堂繪畫課的具體描述；

●你從中獲得的啟發(fā)．
Date：June 8，2012
　　Last week，I visit two painting classes at a primary school．In one class a student called Amy dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints．By contrast，the same student used a brush to make a beautiful landscape painting．
　　The two paintings both intrigued me．They reminded me of a famous saying"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground．"The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success．
　　Success needs more than being simply down-to-earth，which also need dreams．The second painting embodied the reach of our dreams．Instead of ignoring the gleam of light that flashes across our mind，we'd better trust that the gleam and the spark will one day shine if we have faith in ourselves．
　　So we should dream big and act small．Only by doing so，can we really make our dream come true．．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)文章要求--寫感想，可知為議論文．
時間為"上周一"，可以推測時態(tài)為一般過去時為主．寫作人稱為第一人稱．
本題為開放類作文，考生根據(jù)圖畫寫出繪畫課給自己的啟發(fā)即可．答案不唯一．

重要短語及句型：
intrigue sb 激發(fā)某人的興趣
dip one's feet in sp 把腳扎進(jìn)某處
by contrast 相反地
down-to-earth 腳踏實地的，實際的
embody  v．體現(xiàn)；使…具體化
gleam   n．光芒
Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground．
腳踏實地，仰望星空．

高分句型：
一、The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success．
第一幅畫表示我們應(yīng)該腳踏實地，警惕被一時的成功沖昏頭腦．
本句包含了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success．
二、Instead of ignoring the gleam of light that flashes across our mind，we'd better trust that the gleam and the spark will one day shine if we have faith in ourselves．
不要忽視我們心中的小火星，如果我們有足夠的信念，相信"星星之火可以燎原"．
instead of…為方式狀語，of為介詞，后加動名詞．

解答 Date：June 8，2012
　　Last week，I visit two painting classes at a primary school．In one class a student called Amy dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints．By contrast，the same student used a brush to make a beautiful landscape painting．（敘述上周發(fā)生的事情）
　　The two paintings both intrigued me．They reminded me of a famous saying"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground．"The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success．【高分句型一】（腳踏實地的重要性）
　　Success needs more than being simply down-to-earth，which also need dreams．The second painting embodied the reach of our dreams．Instead of ignoring the gleam of light that flashes across our mind，we'd better trust that the gleam and the spark will one day shine if we have faith in ourselves．【高分句型二】（保持夢想的重要性）
　　So we should dream big and act small．Only by doing so，can we really make our dream come true．（總結(jié)）

點評 考生在寫作時需明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢．考生在平時應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问剑�積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．