【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I bought a book Sister Carrie in your online bookshop for its convenient and good service. I am very glad to receive it yesterday. Therefore, when I opened the package, I was sorry to find something wrong for it.

Firstly, the cover of the novel is breaking and there are some dirty spots on it due to the poor packaging. In an addition, some pages are missing, that makes it impossible to read.

I would like you change it for a new one and post it to me as soon as possible. Please do check the book and being careful with the packaging beforehand this time. I hope you can live up to the expectation of my customer.

【答案】1.convenient→convenience

2.am→was

3.Therefore→However

4.for→with

5.breaking→broken

6.將an刪除

7.that→which

8.在you后加to

9.being→be

10.my→your

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。作者在網(wǎng)上買了一本書，但書的質(zhì)量有問題，因此要求退換。

第一處：考查名詞。its是形容詞性物主代詞，后跟名詞。故將convenient改為convenience。

第二處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：昨天收到它我很高興。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語yesterday可知，要用一般過去式。故將am改為was。

第三處：考查副詞。句意：然而，當(dāng)我打開包裹時(shí)，我很抱歉發(fā)現(xiàn)它有問題。根據(jù)上一句句意（昨天收到它我很高興。）可知，和本句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將Therefore改為However。

第四處：考查介詞。句意同上。表示“…….有問題”常用介詞with，結(jié)合句意。故將for改為with。

第五處：考查形容詞。句意：首先，小說的封面壞了。分析句式可知，此處是做句子的表語，需用break的過去分詞充當(dāng)?shù)男稳菰~作表語。故將breaking改為broken。

第六處：考查固定短語。in addition是固定短語，意思是“此外”，因此，an是多余的。故將an刪除。

第七處：考查定語從句。句意：此外，一些頁面丟失了，這使它不可能閱讀。這是個(gè)定語從句，關(guān)系詞指代整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容，從句中缺少主語，用which引導(dǎo)。that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。故將that改為which。

第八處：考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。would like sb to do sth是固定結(jié)構(gòu)，意思是“想要某人做某事”。故在you后加to。

第九處：考查動詞。and連接兩個(gè)并列結(jié)構(gòu)，根據(jù)and前的do check可知，此處用動詞原形。故將being改為be。

第十處：考查代詞。句意：我希望你們能不辜負(fù)客戶的期望。根據(jù)句意可知，不辜負(fù)你的客戶。故將my改為your。

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