Question

【題目】孩子的成長(zhǎng)和教育是社會(huì)熱議的話題,現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過(guò)度依賴(lài)等現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)閱讀下面的漫畫(huà)，按要求用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要求：1.描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容； 2.分析漫畫(huà)所揭示的問(wèn)題； 3.提出你的看法。

注意：

1.短文開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；

3.詞數(shù)120左右;

4.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

參考詞匯:pave the way

From the picture,we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.

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Answer 1

【答案】From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed,waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet sweating.

It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families,Shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare on effort to pave the way for their success.As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have on independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern.In my opinion,over protection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development.Instead of doing everything for them,parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves.Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

【解析】試題分析：本文屬于看圖說(shuō)話類(lèi)作文。首先要讀懂圖片隱含的信息；其次，分析漫畫(huà)所揭示的問(wèn)題；最后結(jié)合自己的看法，寫(xiě)出相應(yīng)的總結(jié)和感受。本文書(shū)關(guān)于孩子的成長(zhǎng)和教育問(wèn)題，現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過(guò)度依賴(lài)等現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重，一定要突出主題。文章可采用三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)描述。寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中一定要注意巧用連接詞，巧妙銜接，合理安排。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語(yǔ)言精練，同時(shí)運(yùn)用高級(jí)句子。同位語(yǔ)從句的使用：It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, Shouldering the hope of their parents.倒裝句的使用：Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful。