分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟:1. 認(rèn)真審題,找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.2. 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3. 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài).注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.4.最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一:
It's three months since I heard from you last time.Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson
離我上次收到你的信已經(jīng)三個(gè)月了,現(xiàn)在我要告訴你一個(gè)感人的故事,發(fā)生在我的第一節(jié)課.
高分句型二:
Moved by his words,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named"Mother"for the students.
被他的話所感動,我贊揚(yáng)了他的行為,決定唱一首名為"母親"給學(xué)生們.
解答 Dear Zhang Hua,
It's three months since I heard from you last time.Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson(高分句型一).
On hearing the bell,students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can.But a boy,Li Ming,whose father died a month ago,was late for the class.He stood outside the classroom,silently.I smiled to him and let him came in.After a while,he cried on his desk.Then I walked to him and asked what had happened.He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his words,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named"Mother"for the students(高分句型二).How time flies!Class was over before I realized it.
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them.Do you think so?I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hong
點(diǎn)評 本文屬于半開放性提綱式書信體,要點(diǎn)有三,選材學(xué)生熟悉,也是發(fā)生在他們身邊的故事,學(xué)生只要把握準(zhǔn)情景和要求,使表達(dá)的內(nèi)容不走題即可.
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