Question

11．假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你以自己網(wǎng)上購書所遇到的不愉快經(jīng)歷，向中國某家英文報(bào)紙生活欄目寫一封抱怨信．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．所購書中有破損、缺頁現(xiàn)象；
2．一些書籍價(jià)格比實(shí)體書店還要貴；
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Sir or Madame，
I am a middle school student．I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and disappointment about the unpleasant experience _____________________________________________________
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I would be grateful if you could take my opinion into consideration．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The reason for my dissatisfaction and disappointment is that the books I bought online were beyond my expectation．我的不滿及失望來自于我在網(wǎng)上所購書籍完全超出我的意料，品質(zhì)沒有保障．
高分句型二：
To solve these problems，I am writing this letter to you，hoping that my letter will arouse the attention of the public through this media． 為了解決這些問題，我寫了這封信給您，希望通過該平臺(tái)能引起公眾對(duì)此的關(guān)注．
句型一  用到了一個(gè)復(fù)合句型，在句中用一個(gè)that 引導(dǎo)的表語從句來說明原因，更具說服力，說明該生對(duì)此類從句用法掌握精準(zhǔn)．
句型二 ①句首用到了to do 不定式作目的狀語 ②句中用到了hoping 作伴隨狀語 此2處知識(shí)的運(yùn)用，將非謂語使用的相當(dāng)好，使文章增色很多．

解答 Dear Sir or Madame，
I am a middle school student．I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and disappointment about the unpleasant experience when I bought some books from the Internet the other day．
The reason for my dissatisfaction and disappointment is that the books I bought online were beyond my expectation．（高分句型一）In the first place，they were poorly printed．In addition，some books are slightly damaged and even some pages are missing．Needless to say，the price of some books is even higher than that in our local Xinhua Bookstores．
To solve these problems，I am writing this letter to you，hoping that my letter will arouse the attention of the public through this media．（高分句型二）I am fully confident that they will improve their service with the supervision of the public opinion．
I would be grateful if you could take my opinion into consideration．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)用類書面表達(dá)多采用開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出的形式，其目的在于給特定的對(duì)象傳達(dá)信息．考生應(yīng)注意平時(shí)積累適用于該類文體的常見用語，力求語言準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔，句子不宜過長(zhǎng)，要讓讀者一眼就能明白文章的重點(diǎn)．