Question

某英文報社就“關(guān)愛空巢老人”這一話題進行征文。請你根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英語短文投稿。內(nèi)容主要包括：

空巢老人越來越多的原因。2.他們面臨的問題。3. 如何幫助他們。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Old people that live alone with no family to take care of them are now called the empty-nestelderly.______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Old people that live alone with no family member to take care of them are now called the empty-nest elderly. Social and economic developments have led many young people to choose to work and live far from their hometowns, leaving their parents alone.

The empty-nest elderly can’t manage things that require much manual labor. And because of long-term loneliness, they may have mental problems like depression.

Therefore, we should pay more attention to them. We should call for volunteers to offer them help on a regular basis. We can help them clean the house, buy household items, carry heavy things upstairs, etc. Besides, the government should spend more money providing places for the elderly to be entertained and communicate.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇關(guān)于“關(guān)愛空巢老人”話題文章寫作。文章的內(nèi)容主要包括分析空巢老人越來越多的原因，總結(jié)他們面臨的問題，以及提出如何幫助空巢老人的建議。注意調(diào)理要清晰，內(nèi)容要全面而具體，原因和問題的分析到深刻，建議要力求切實可行。另外，要盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)上：根據(jù)內(nèi)容分為分析原因、總結(jié)問題和提出建議。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點說明】live alone，take care of，live far from，because of，pay more attention to，call for等組詞是文章更加生動；Old people that live alone with no family member to take care of them are now called the empty-nest elderly.使用定語從句，對于空巢老人這一新名詞的定義作出解釋。Social and economic developments have led many young people to choose to work and live far from their hometowns, leaving their parents alone.后面部分使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語，說明了空巢老人出現(xiàn)的原因，是文章句型結(jié)構(gòu)更加豐富靈活。在如何幫助空巢老人的件以上，連續(xù)運用三個動詞短語：help them clean the house, buy household items, carry heavy things upstairs，使文章更有節(jié)奏感。文章的安排分為三部分，第一段：說明空巢老人的定義，分析空巢老人出現(xiàn)的原因。第二段：總結(jié)空巢老人面臨的生活和精神困難。第三段：針對現(xiàn)狀，提出解決空巢老人問題的建議。

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