Question

18．隨著髙考臨近，某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社向?qū)W生征集給父母的一封信．假如你是某校髙三學(xué)生李華，準(zhǔn) 備應(yīng)報(bào)社之征給自己父母寫一封信．信的要點(diǎn)包括：
1．感謝父母的關(guān)心和幫助；
2．向父母訴說兩件心事*
3．根據(jù)心事向父母提出兩個(gè)請(qǐng)求． 注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右》
2．文中不得提及真實(shí)人名、校名及地名；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出．（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Dad and Mom，
With the College Entrance Examination around the corner，I feel both excited and sressed．There are lots of words I'd like to share with you two．
I'm always thankful to you for your making great efforts to take care of me unselfishly．Now I have two things in my mind that worry me a lot．One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively．As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons．Another requirement is to tell me how to deal with the relationship between boys and girls properly so that I can focus my energy on my studies．Thank you．
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively．本句是一個(gè)復(fù)雜句，其中and連接了兩個(gè)并列句"One is that…and the other is that"，兩句都是that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，在第一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句中用了英語(yǔ)的固定句型"have difficulty in doing sth"做某事有困難；這里which引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代的是前面整個(gè)句子的意思．
高分句型二：As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons．因此我希望你們兩個(gè)能夠鼓勵(lì)我在數(shù)學(xué)課上能克服困難．其中both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons是賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear Dad and Mom，
     With the College Entrance Examination around the corner，I feel both excited and sressed．There are lots of words I'd like to share with you two．
     I'm always thankful to you for your making great efforts to take care of me unselfishly．Now I have two things in my mind that worry me a lot．One is that I have difficulty in understanding math lessons，and the other is that I think I have fallen in love with one of my classmates，which I'm afraid will affect my studies negatively（句型一）．【向父母闡明心事】As a result，I really hope both of you can encourage me to overcome my trouble with my math lessons（句型二）．Another requirement is to tell me how to deal with the relationship between boys and girls properly so that I can focus my energy on my studies．Thank you．【向父母提出請(qǐng)求】
  Best wishes!
  Yours
  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．