Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.

Answer 1

【答案】I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four

hold

when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,

passed well

with broad shoulder and a beard that∧turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set

shoulders had

himself apart from others in our small town,∧he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away had 去掉a

him during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.

when ever

【解析】句意為“我?guī)缀醪挥浀梦业淖婺浮Ｋ�過去常常抱著我跪在地上，唱老歌�！笨疾楣潭ù钆洌瑄sed to do sth ,過去常常做某事，故將holding改為hold。

句意為“我只有四歲時(shí)，她去世了�！蓖馄湃ナ肋@件事發(fā)生在過去，所以應(yīng)該用過去式，故將passes改為passed。

句意為“我非常深的記得我的祖父。”very much 可以修飾許多動(dòng)詞,但就是不能修飾remember.remember 只能被well/clearly修飾,表達(dá)“記得很深/好.”故將much改為well。

句意為“他個(gè)子很高，肩膀?qū)掗煛�，根�?jù)常理，人有兩個(gè)肩膀，肩膀應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將 shoulder改為 shoulders 。

And后的句子 a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.缺少謂語，句意為祖父有多年從黑色變成了灰色的胡子，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該與前文保持一致，用過去時(shí)，故在此處加上had。

句意：他的深沉的聲音把他和別人區(qū)別開來。所以應(yīng)該用賓格him。故將himself改為him。

根據(jù)句中結(jié)構(gòu)可知He had a deep voice…和he was strong and powerful是并列關(guān)系，故用and連接。

實(shí)際上，固定短語應(yīng)該為in fact ,故刪去a。

during為介詞，后不能接句子；應(yīng)用when這個(gè)連詞引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句。故將during改為when。

語義錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)句意：他是我認(rèn)識(shí)的最溫柔的人。故將將never改為ever。