Question

假如你是Jack Darwin, 你的客戶Li Ming給你寫(xiě)了一封信, 內(nèi)容如下：
Dear Jack,
I’m writing this letter to ask for a favor. I will visit England soon, but I know little about the culture of England. Please give me a hand.
Yours,
Li Ming
請(qǐng)給Li Ming回一封信，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．遵守靠左行走或駕駛的交通規(guī)則，出門帶傘；
2．公共場(chǎng)合應(yīng)注意的問(wèn)題(如保持安靜)；
3．和英國(guó)人交往要遵守的事項(xiàng)(如提前預(yù)約，尊重隱私)。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右，信的格式、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
2．參考詞匯：appointment  n.預(yù)約
3．無(wú)需逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

Answer 1

Dear Li Ming,
It is a great chance to visit England. Just take the following points into account and you will find your vacation comfortable.
First, you should adapt yourself to driving and walking on the 1eft, which is the basic rule of British traffic. Besides, you’d better get into the habit of bringing an umbrella when going out as the weather there is changeable. Second, please keep quiet even in public places like supermarkets because noise is offensive there. Also, remember to keep some distance when talking with British people since they don’t like to be too close to others. Third, every time you are going to see a doctor or visit a friend, you’d better make an appointment ahead of time. By the way, it is a good thing to bring a small gift. Last but not least, it is very impolite to ask questions about one’s privacy, which will easily cause misunderstanding.
Have a good time.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Darwin

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。你的客戶Li Ming給你寫(xiě)了一封信詢問(wèn)你英國(guó)的文化和風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書(shū)信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了一些常用的短語(yǔ)：take ... into account 把......考慮進(jìn)去；get into the habit of 養(yǎng)成......習(xí)慣；make an appointment ahead of time提前預(yù)約；which is the basic rule of British traffic. which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句； every time you are going to see a doctor or visit a friend,這句話用 every time 引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；用First,Second,Third,Last but not least,使文章條理清晰；用Besides，Also，By the way,使文章更加連貫。