Question

假定你是李華，你最喜歡的歌手Justin Bieber(賈斯汀·比伯)下個(gè)月將到你市演出。近日你準(zhǔn)備和幾個(gè)朋友成立Justin Bieber的歌迷俱樂部。請(qǐng)你給你的加拿大筆友Fred發(fā)一封郵件，表明你們喜歡該歌手的理由(如：他很迷人，他的歌能讓人感受到真愛等)，并希望Fred就如何辦好歌迷俱樂部提出一些建議。
注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Fred,
I’m glad to tell you that Justin Bieber, my favorite singer, will come to our city to perform next month.
I’m so pleased at the news that I decide to form a Justin Bieber fan club with some of my friends. All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic! His song makes us feel the true love. We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more about him. But we don’t know what we should do, and where we can pick up some useful information about him and his performing plans. Could you give us some advice?
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes ,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，內(nèi)容是賈斯汀·比伯下個(gè)月將到你市演出。近日你準(zhǔn)備和幾個(gè)朋友成立Justin Bieber的歌迷俱樂部。請(qǐng)你給你的加拿大筆友Fred發(fā)一封郵件，表明你們喜歡該歌手的理由(如：他很迷人，他的歌能讓人感受到真愛等)，并希望Fred就如何辦好歌迷俱樂部提出一些建議。根據(jù)內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，介紹Justin，請(qǐng)求對(duì)方提建議用提建議的詞和短語(yǔ)。注意增加細(xì)節(jié)，使銜接合理，還要盡量用高中階段學(xué)習(xí)詞匯和句型。注意長(zhǎng)短搭配。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)明確，思路清晰。分三段把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)都涵蓋了。同時(shí)注意應(yīng)用較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如，pick up，Look forward to還運(yùn)用了news后跟了同位語(yǔ)從句說(shuō)明內(nèi)容、 賓語(yǔ)從句等較復(fù)雜的句子。并注意了句子的銜接如：But，and等等。