Question

近來，教育部頒布文件要求逐步將體育考試納入高考。此舉引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注。下面是人們的一些觀點(diǎn)。請你結(jié)合此事，根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。

同意	1、對增強(qiáng)學(xué)生體質(zhì)有引導(dǎo)作用； 2、學(xué)校的體育教學(xué)將更加受到重視； 3、體育課被擠占的現(xiàn)象將不再存在。
反對	1、測試并非體育教學(xué)的目的； 2、體育應(yīng)該從培養(yǎng)運(yùn)動興趣出發(fā)； 3、提高學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)并非一朝一夕就能夠完成。
你的看法	……

參考詞匯：高考College Entrance Examination；
注意：1. 必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)120左右；
3. 開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Recently a new policy was approved by the Ministry of Education.
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Recently a new policy was approved by the Ministry of Education. It is regulated that sports scores will be added to the scores of every student’s College Entrance Examination. The policy caused many people’s concern. 
Some people hold the view that the policy will serve as a guide to strengthen students’ physical quality. Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education, and it’s easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen.
On the other hand, some people argue that Roman was not built in a day. It takes time to meet the goal. The teaching of PE should be aimed at developing students’ interest in sports rather than using scores as a means of assessment. If the policy of college Entrance Examination doesn’t carry out a reform fundamentally, this new policy won’t work out well.
In my opinion, every school should make a specific plan of improving students’ physical quality. Setting aside some time for students to work out every day is also helpful.

試題分析： 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于正反觀點(diǎn)對比的文章，所以在文章開頭應(yīng)該首先提出寫作背景，即討論的內(nèi)容。在謀篇布局方面，根據(jù)表格提示信息可以把文章分為三段，即同意的觀點(diǎn)，反對的觀點(diǎn)和作者的看法。而且從要點(diǎn)提示可知文章應(yīng)該采用一般現(xiàn)在時，使用第一人稱。因?yàn)樘崾疽�點(diǎn)較多，而且為了行文的流暢和內(nèi)容的銜接，同學(xué)們在寫作時要恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，比如for one thing , for another thing , besides , in addition 等。此外，在寫作時還要注意使用高級詞匯和多種句式，比如定語從句，狀語從句，倒裝句等的使用以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合觀點(diǎn)類作文的寫作模式。作者在文章開頭提出人們關(guān)注的體育測試是否進(jìn)入高考這一問題，然后介紹了贊同的觀點(diǎn)，反對的觀點(diǎn)，最后講明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法。這種結(jié)構(gòu)安排使文章內(nèi)容緊湊，層次分明。在文中作者使用on the other hand 和 in my opinion 等作為過渡，使文章內(nèi)容連貫，行文流暢。文中大量短語 hold the view , attach importance to , work out ，aim at和定語從句以及諺語的使用some people argue that Roman was not built in a day.顯示了作者豐富的詞匯知識和對句式的準(zhǔn)確把握，這些都為范文增添了亮點(diǎn)。