Question

2．假如你叫李華，你的網(wǎng)友Johnny六年前曾在你的家鄉(xiāng)擔(dān)任外教，最近發(fā)來郵件詢問你家鄉(xiāng)的變化．請你給Johnny回復(fù)一封郵件，要點如下：
1．家鄉(xiāng)的變化（住、行等方面）；
2．存在的問題（污染等）．
注意：1．次數(shù)100詞左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3．開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：modern facilities（現(xiàn)代化設(shè)施）
Dear Johnny，
I'm glad to hear from you and I'm more than willing to tell you what you are concerned about．
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I hope that you'll be back to have a look at the new town soon．
                                                                     Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給六年前曾在家鄉(xiāng)擔(dān)任外教的Johnny回復(fù)一封郵件告訴他家鄉(xiāng)的變化，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是現(xiàn)在完成時，內(nèi)容要點包括：家鄉(xiāng)的變化（住、行等方面）；存在的問題（污染等）．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為家鄉(xiāng)的變化．第二部分為存在的問題．
重點短語與句型：
more than非常
be willing to do sth愿意做某事
be concerned about關(guān)心，擔(dān)心
take place 發(fā)生
take measures to do sth采取措施做某事
高分句型一：Our living conditions have improved greatly and many people have moved into large and comfortable houses，which are equipped with modern facilities..此句用了which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句
高分句型二：Hopefully the government will take measures to solve the problems so that our hometown can enjoy healthy and steady development in the years to come．此句用so that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句

解答 Dear Johnny，
    I'm glad to hear from you and I'm more than willing to tell you what you are concerned about．The last few years have witnessed great changes taking place in my hometown．Our living conditions have improved greatly and many people have moved into large and comfortable houses，which are equipped with modern facilities（高分句型一）．Believe it or not，many families now have cars of their own．Wide roads have been built and tall buildings can be seen everywhere．（家鄉(xiāng)的變化）
   Hand in hand with the rapid development of the economy，however，have arisen many problems，especially the serious air and water pollution．Hopefully the government will take measures to solve the problems so that our hometown can enjoy healthy and steady development in the years to come．I hope that you'll be back to have a look at the new town soon．（高分句型二）（ 存在的問題）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．