Question

假設你是李華，明年即將進入大學學習，但是不知怎樣適應大學的生活。請你就以下大學新生常遇到的情況給北京大學校長寫一封信，尋求建議。
（1）在生活中不會照料自己；（2）感到孤獨、經(jīng)常想家；（3）錢物容易丟失；（4）食物、氣候不適應；（5）校外租房現(xiàn)象。
注意：1.短信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 2.詞數(shù)100左右。3. 參考詞匯：大學新生：freshman
Dear President,
Next year I will go to study at university, but I don’t know how to adapt myself touniversitylife. _________________________________________________________________
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Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear President,
Next year I will go to study at university, but I don’t know how to adapt myself to university life. I hear many freshmen are at a loss what to do when they are at university. They can’t take care of themselves in their everyday life, feeling lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phones are sometimes gone. And because of different climates and food, they often feel sick. Some even rent rooms outside the campus. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to suit the university life in the future?
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查書信類作文的寫法，書信類作文要注意格式，包括稱呼，正文，祝賀語，署名等，一般情況格式都會寫好，考生寫好正文就行，正文部分要根據(jù)所給的要點，表達清楚，不能遺漏，這篇書信的要點是大學新生常遇到的情況，要求給北京大學校長寫一封信，尋求建議，一共給了5個要點，可適當使用高級句型和高級詞匯，如范文里的句子They can’t take care of themselves in their everyday life, feeling lonely and homesick.用了現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語。因為要點只是個提綱，具體的內(nèi)容要考生加入，使文章內(nèi)容充實。
考點; 考查書信類作文的寫法
點評：這是封征求建議信，根據(jù)要點一一做出描述，注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語影響。多使用平時學習的句子和短語會有幫助。