Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計分。

Last weekend we went mountainclimbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road,all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain,there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. After short rest,we started going down. It rained more harder. We were wet all over,and we still felt happy.

Answer 1

Last weekend we went mountainclimbing.  Even the heavy rain can not stop us.   We set off early and went along an could extreme narrow road,all in high spirit. On either side of the extremely spirits road was green fields.   We could hear the sound of the rain were mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached、the top of the mixed mountain,there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes,where After A short rest,we started going down.It rained a more harder. We were wet all over,and we still felt much或去掉more but happy.