Question

下面的這幅畫展現(xiàn)了兩人合做一張凳子卻各忙各的情景，請(qǐng)根據(jù)對(duì)這幅畫的理解，用英語寫一篇短文。

你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：

1、描述圖片內(nèi)容，如人物、動(dòng)作、情景等；

2、圖片主要反映了怎樣的問題；

3、結(jié)合實(shí)際談?wù)勀銓?duì)解決此類問題的看法；

4、詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已為你寫好。

Cooperation which has always been a hot topic plays a very important role in today's world. But not everyone knows how to cooperate well.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Cooperation. which has always been a hot topic, plays a very important role in today's world d. But not everyone knows how to cooperate well.

In the picture, we can see two men are trying to make a bench together. Both o f them are working hard, sweating a lot But obviously they are fixing the legs on opposite sides.

Seeing the picture, I can't help thinking how ridiculous it is. The two men work as a team and both of them do make their effort. But unfortunately they just mind their own business without communicating with each other. It appears to me that they are not cooperating in an effective way. Working without cooperation leads to inefficiency.

But how can we cooperate more effectively? From my point of view, cooperation calls for effective communication, without which people will do things blindly. We should exchange ideas with our partners and work out a careful plan before taking actions. Otherwise, all the efforts will be in vain, just like what the two men do in the picture.

【解析】

試題分析：看圖作文就是要求根據(jù)圖畫(或表格)的內(nèi)容展開合理的想像，寫出文章的一種寫作方式�？磮D作文應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)： (1)認(rèn)真讀圖，弄清大意：讀圖時(shí)要充分理解圖畫所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，弄清圖中的人物在干什么，弄清圖畫背景與人物之間的聯(lián)系，弄清事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。(2) 理出要點(diǎn)，擬定提綱： (3) 緊扣要點(diǎn)，擴(kuò)寫成文。 (4) 通讀短文，修正錯(cuò)誤。寫好文章之后應(yīng)通讀全文進(jìn)行檢查。在檢查時(shí)，應(yīng)著重看短文是否扣住圖畫的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)是否有遺漏。同時(shí)，還要注意有無語法錯(cuò)誤，如時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等，是否符合文體特點(diǎn)、格式等等。

考點(diǎn)：考查看圖寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：讀圖之后，要根據(jù)圖畫表達(dá)的主要內(nèi)容，理出表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)。列出要點(diǎn)時(shí)要注意分清主次，不能看到圖中有什么就認(rèn)為什么要寫。看圖作文時(shí)描述圖畫內(nèi)容是不可取的，應(yīng)充分展開想像使圖畫活起來。理出要點(diǎn)之后，就可以根據(jù)要點(diǎn)擬定提綱,即把整個(gè)圖畫中要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容先用一句話寫下來。在列出要點(diǎn)后，依據(jù)已經(jīng)寫出來的話語擴(kuò)寫成一篇短文。擴(kuò)寫時(shí)，可運(yùn)用想象適度發(fā)揮，緊扣圖畫的內(nèi)容，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)敘述，連貫通順即可。