Question

11．假如你是李華，最近你在澳大利亞布里斯班的home stay打算來(lái)中國(guó)旅游并來(lái)看望你，來(lái)之前有些問(wèn)題要咨詢(xún)你，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面home stay的電子郵件用英語(yǔ)回一封電子郵件．
Hi Li Hua，
Hope you and your family are well．We have booked a tour to see the sights of China in August In the travel we plan to fly to Wuhan to see you．How does that sound？Because we are going to stay in your city for two days，so can you keep us informed of your arrangements about our stay and how can we get to your city from the airport？By the way，please tell me which hotel we had better reserve in your city？
Waiting for your reply!
Steven and Karen
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100字左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容不要透露你所在城市的任何信息，推薦酒店為White Swan Hotel．
Hi Steven and Karen，
I'm  more than thrilled to know you are going to be with us for two days and
                                                                  
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給澳大利亞布里斯班的home stay寫(xiě)一封電子郵件．告知他要來(lái)中國(guó)旅游而咨詢(xún)的一些問(wèn)題．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一和第二人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．開(kāi)頭-引出話(huà)題； 2．具體安排：安排行程；到達(dá)方式；預(yù)定賓館．
重要短語(yǔ)：more than（非常），be worthwhile to do（值得做某事），get a better understanding of（有更好的理解），have a feast for（享受…），It is very convenient for sb to do（對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)很方便做某事），pick sb up（用車(chē)接某人），save sb sth（節(jié)省某人某物），as for（關(guān)于），well-equipped（配備良好），reserve sth（預(yù)定某事），have a discount（打折扣）．
【高分句型一】
1．I'm more than thrilled to know ①that you are going to be with us for two days ②and I'm writing to tell you my arrangements for your stay in our city．
①此處是由連詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，主句為"I'm more than thrilled to know"．
②此處是由連詞"and"連接的兩個(gè)并列的句子．
【高分句型二】
2．Additionally，①since ②there lies a lake in our city，we can cycle around the lake to have a feast for our eyes．
①此處是由連詞"since"引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為"we can cycle around the lake to have a feast for our eyes"．
②此處是完全倒裝句型，類(lèi)似"There be"結(jié)構(gòu)的倒裝句型如："There lies/stands/exists/lived"等．
【高分句型三】
3．By the way，it is very convenient for my parents and me to pick you up at the airport，which can save you a lot of trouble from taking a bus or a train．
    此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"it is very convenient for my parents and me to pick you up at the airport"．

解答 Hi Steven and Karen，
I'm more than thrilled to know that you are going to be with us for two days and I'm writing to tell you my arrangements for your stay in our city．【高分句型一】（開(kāi)頭-引出話(huà)題）
I swear you will find it worthwhile to visit our city．I can guide you to the museum．Therefore you can get a better understanding of our history．Additionally，since there lies a lake in our city，we can cycle around the lake to have a feast for our eyes．【高分句型二】（安排行程）By the way，it is very convenient for my parents and me to pick you up at the airport，which can save you a lot of trouble from taking a bus or a train．【高分句型三】（到達(dá)方式）
As for the hotel，I strongly recommend White Swan Hotel．It is a five-star hotel with well-equipped rooms and excellent services．If you can reserve a room in advance，you can have a good discount．（預(yù)定賓館）
Looking forward to your coming!
Li Hua

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