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【題目】書面表達

近來，中國游客在海外的不文明行為倍受爭議。假設你是李華，一名國際旅行社的導游，就此寫一篇短文在一份英文報紙上發(fā)表自己的觀點。請根據下面的提示完成作文。

1、列舉不文明行為： 2、指出其影響： 3、提出建議。

注意：1、詞數100左右；

2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3、首句已給出，不計入總詞數。

As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad．

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As a tour guide of an international travel agency, I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights. Such bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.

Measures should be taken to stop this. First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.

【解析】試題分析：近來，中國游客在海外的不文明行為倍受爭議。假設你是李華，一名國際旅行社的導游，就此寫一篇短文在一份英文報紙上發(fā)表自己的觀點。請根據下面的提示完成作文。要點包括：1、列舉不文明行為；2、指出其影響；3、提出建議。這是一篇明顯的提綱作文，就是把文章的情景和內容要求分成塊，以條目的形式列出以進行寫作�？忌�在審題的時候應該注意審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時態(tài)。題文已經告知要求，那么文體應為應用文體；又根據“你是李華” 寫作時即用第一人稱“我”，即李華；時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時即可�？忌�在寫作時應該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點逐條表達出來。表達時應該綜合運用所掌握的知識，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語的干擾，按照英語的習慣方式，用地道的英語表達出來，力求做到語言準確無誤。然后根據要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結構連句成篇。

【亮點說明】本文語言凝練，論點鮮明，條理層次清晰。文章第一段介紹自己旅行發(fā)現(xiàn)的不良現(xiàn)象；第二段就介紹應該采取的措施和自己的看法。文章使用了被動語態(tài)Measures should be taken to stop this（應該采取措施制止這種現(xiàn)象），tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs（游客應該被訓練遵守社交和公共秩序，尊重當地的宗教和習慣），laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places（應該制定法律懲罰那些在公共場合行為惡劣的人）；who引導的定語從句who behave badly in public places（那些在公共場合行為惡劣的人）。高級短語和結構：cause damage to給……帶來危害；win respect for為……贏得尊重。最后一句使用I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.我期待海外游客將會改變他們的行為并為他們自己和我們的國家贏得尊重，作者提出自己的希望并給文章一個完美的結束。