Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last summer vacation, I spent two week at my aunt’s. She lived in the small mountain village, with a river ran nearby. Early one morning, I wanted to swim in the river, which some women villagers were washing clothes. I find a good place for swimming and I was just about to jump into the river while there came a cry, “Help! Help!” I looked the direction of the cry and I found that a little boy had been fallen into the river. I rushed over without delay, jumped into the water and swam quick towards the boy. Holding on to her over the water, I struggled to the bank. At last, the boy was saved

Answer 1

【答案】1. week→weeks

2. the→a

3.ran→running

4. which→where

5. find→found

6. while→when

7. look后加in

8.去掉been

9. quick→quickly

10. her→him

【解析】１.句意：我在我姑姑家待了兩周。ｔｗｏ�。鳎澹澹耄�，故把week→weeks。

２.句意：她住在一個(gè)小山村。故把the→a。

３.句意：她住在一個(gè)小山村，在附近有一條流動(dòng)著的小河。ｗｉｔｈ�。�賓語＋ｄｏｉｎｇ�。螅簦瑁�此處是ｗｉｔｈ的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，故把ran→running。

４.此處the river做先行詞，在后面的非限制性定語從句中做地點(diǎn)狀語，故把which→where。

５. 根據(jù)Last summer vacation可知I find a good place for swimming用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把find→found。

６.句意：我正要跳進(jìn)去，這時(shí)候聽到哭聲。故把while→when。

７. 固定結(jié)構(gòu)：ｉｎ　the direction of朝―――方向，故在look后加in。

８.句意：我發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)小男孩掉進(jìn)河里。本句是主動(dòng)語態(tài)，故去掉been。

９.副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把quick→quickly。

１０.上文提到掉進(jìn)河里的是一個(gè)小男孩，故把her→him。