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17．暑假就要到了，許多同學(xué)都會選擇旅游作為度假的一種方式．的確，旅游對一個人的身心健康頗有好處．那么就請你以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇旅游的文章．
Travel is a very good means of broadening a person's perspective（視野）．
Travel may relieve（減輕）a person of boredom and gloom．
Travelers can choose different modes（方式）of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages．
字?jǐn)?shù)要求：120．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇旅游的文章，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：Travel is a very good means of broadening a person's perspective（視野）．Travel may relieve（減輕）a person of boredom and gloom．Travelers can choose different modes（方式）of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Travelling much，you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences，but also be aware of the vastness of nature．（高分句型一）句中使用了not only，but also，意思是"不僅，而且"
It gives you a pleasant experience，which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you．（高分句型二）句中使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句
Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages．（高分句型三）句中使用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句
Most people can afford traveling by bicycle，which，although slow，can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature．（高分句型四）句中使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句

解答 Travel
　　Travel is a very good means of broadening a person's perspective．It makes you come into contact with different cultures，meet people of different colors and go through  ceremonies．Travelling much，you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences，but also be aware of the vastness of nature．（高分句型一）
　　Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom．Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction．It gives you a pleasant experience，which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you．（高分句型二）Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories．Later，you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences，thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind．The field's his study，nature was his book．
　　Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages．（高分句型三）Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive．Buses and trains are less expensive，but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable．Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick．Most people can afford traveling by bicycle，which，although slow，can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature．（高分句型四）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．