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分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類看圖作文，根據(jù)提示信息當(dāng)今社會(huì)必備的一種交流工具，但是對(duì)手機(jī)的過(guò)度依賴卻成了社會(huì)的一種普遍現(xiàn)象，根據(jù)對(duì)圖的理解，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇作文，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：簡(jiǎn)要描述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容；概述你對(duì)圖畫(huà)中做法的理解；舉例說(shuō)明圖畫(huà)對(duì)你的啟示．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：in our daily life在我們的日常生活中；On one hand，On the other hand一方面，另一方面；at the same time同時(shí)；However然而；
    As is shown in the picture，three persons are playing with their cellphones when having dinner，involving themselves in a personal space．（高分句型一）句中As is shown in the picture屬于as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，意思為"正如圖中所示"；involving themselves in a personal space屬于現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)
 It is common that we use cellphones as a means of communication for its convenience．（高分句型二）句中it為形式主語(yǔ)，that為真正的主語(yǔ)從句

解答 As is shown in the picture，three persons are playing with their cellphones when having dinner，involving themselves in a personal space．（高分句型一） The scene can be seen everywhere in our daily life．Some even have signs of anxiety if they don't have cellphones with them．
     It is common that we use cellphones as a means of communication for its convenience．（高分句型二）However，the fact that people are getting addicted to cell phones can't be ignored．
     I think there are two reasons for this．On one hand，people are eager to share ideas with others．On the other hand，not believing in others，they are unwilling to communicate with people around them face to face．（高分句型三）
     To solve this problem，I think making a balance of our life is the key．We should spend more time with our family and friends，and at the same time try to be self-controlled to avoid over-independence on it．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．