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【題目】英語課上，老師要求同桌相互修改作文。假設以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修。共有10處銷誤，每句中最多有兩處。鋁誤涉及一個單詞的增加、到除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出改加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫錢，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞：2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Li Hui, my friend in high school,has dreamed becoming a cartoon artist since she was young. To her disappointed,her parents don't agree with her decision at first Therefore,Li Hui would not change her mind.She worked hardly to perfect her skills.Just before he finished high school,the chance came:the famous art school was holding a cartoon drawing competition The first three winners would be given a scholarship to study drawing there. Li Hui told herself not to missing the chance.She readily entered the competition and came second. She is now a student in that school and I feel certain what her dream would come true.

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【答案】①dreamed 后加 of 或 about ②disappointed 改為disappointment ③don't 改為didn't④Therefore 改為However ⑤hardly 改為hard⑥he 改為she ⑦the 改為a ⑧missing 改為miss ⑨去掉what或what 改為that ⑩would 改為will

【解析】本文是一篇記敘文，作者講述了自己的高中朋友為堅持要成為一個卡通藝術家的夢想而努力。
（1）考查固定短語。 dream of /about (doing)sth.……固定短語，“渴望、向往、,夢想成為……”，故dreamed后加of/about 。
（2） 考查固定搭配。to one's disappointment固定短語”使某人失望的是......“，故disappointed改為disappointment。
（3）考查時態(tài)。故事發(fā)生在高中時要用一般過去時。故don't 改為didn't。
（4）考查連詞。句意：她的父母起初不同意她的決定，但她卻不會改變主意。根據(jù)句意此處表示轉折，故Therefore改為However
（5）考查副詞。hardly”幾乎不“，表否定意義；hard”努力地“。此處指她努力地工作去完善技能。 hardly應為hard 。
（6）考查代詞。上文提到李慧，代詞用的是she，故he改為she。
（7）考查冠詞的用法。根據(jù)句意：就在她上完高中，一個機會來了。首次提到，而且是可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)。故the改為a 。
（8） 考查非謂語動詞。 tell sb. not not to do sth.固定短語，”告訴某人不要做某事“， to 后要用動詞原形，故missing 改為miss 。
（9）考查名詞從句。I feel certain后面是一個名詞從句，從句句子完整，應用關系詞that，也可省略that。故去掉what或把what換成that。
（10）考查時態(tài)。句意：她現(xiàn)在是那所學校的學生，我確信她的夢想會實現(xiàn)。根據(jù)句意判斷是一般將來時，而非過去將來時。故would改為will。